I've been thinking about my own draft for project 3, and I have to tell you (Prof. Lay) that I only have two pages. It isn't my best work, but I like where I am going with it. It is a narration of a day at Hofstra, which I feel is more sentimental than analytical, and the instructions said to not be sentimental, so I do not think I did the assignment correctly.
I am peer reviewing a colleague's draft of Project 3, and my first reaction is that this draft is good. I like the use of the quote. It adds a lot to the essay. The rhetorical questions work in that they allow the writer to define what home is to her.
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